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full view please.

hi, this is what art school does to your personal style. not that i'm really complaining.
this is part of an image i'm working on. this is just the head, in the original, there is more than just this. it's a preview, i suppose (:

it's a girl!
i've been told she looks like a man/ monkey. any critiques and help would be appreciated. thanks <3
photoshop7, 8 hours.

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:iconhokuto:
She doesn't look like a man to me - but then I probably have skewed perceptions (yay manga XD ). I love her full lips and GORGEOUS eyeshadow... :heart:

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:iconblackwingedbutterfly:
wow! This picture is so life like! so real! I love the eyes and the face is very well done! The pout of the lips is a really nice touch. Wonderful work :)
:iconladykaeru:
Well, the only actual critique I can see is the lips and nose look as if they're facing different directions. THe lips seem to face left, (<--) the nose seems to face right, (-->;) and the eyes straight forward. I could be totally wrong, but it's just how it seems to me.

I hope that was somewhat helpful. :)

I love the neat colors around the eyes, though.

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:iconminnesotawildgurl17:
omg omg omgomg i seriously cannot find the right words to describe how absolutely amazing and gorgeous this is DDDD>

that hair..that face...those eyes...THOSE FRECKLES ;3; <333

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:iconminnesotawildgurl17:
and maybe its just me but the little dimple thing below the nose and above the lips seems off and make the lips look like off center/off too....

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:iconkiminess:
If you don't look directly at any single area, like, maybe in the center, like the tip of her nose, her lips and her nose are a little crooked. Her lips are slightly slanted diagonally. And the little slope that the upper lip and septum of the nose make don't exactly meet up, so, it makes her look a little strange...

You said you wanted critique, I hope it helps.

But her eyes are gorgeous!
I adore how you colored it.
It's just her lips.
They're beautiful too, mind you.
They're just... crooked compared to the rest of her. ^^ :heart:

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:iconwhystherumalwaysgone:
ahhhh so beautiful, very nicely done! ^^

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:icongoddessofthesun:
The eyes are kinda... pointing outwards.... D':
But I really love the coloring! I love her freckles. <3 I can't wait to see the rest of it.
What kind of art class do you take?

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:iconjieyi:
pointing outwards? i'm not quite sure what you mean by that so would you please clarify? thanks (:
art classes.. i have loads of those. comp art, drawing, design.

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:icondeviantgirl12:
she might have been referring to the irises. :shrug: I think they look fine.

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